I Know At Least 100 Of You Read This...

I also know that at least 10-80 people look at my novel on Smashwords.
What am I doing that's not grabbing your attention?  I need feedback.  I want you to read and appreciate what I wrote, and I also want to generate income for my family.
Do I need more beta readers?  More sample chapters? Harder hooks?
I wrote what I want to see in a novel, I wrote what made me throw books across rooms in other peoples works.  I feel like I'm screaming into a void here.
Talk to me, people.