What am I doing that's not grabbing your attention? I need feedback. I want you to read and appreciate what I wrote, and I also want to generate income for my family.
Do I need more beta readers? More sample chapters? Harder hooks?
I wrote what I want to see in a novel, I wrote what made me throw books across rooms in other peoples works. I feel like I'm screaming into a void here.
Talk to me, people.